I
miss
you,
he
whispered,
quite
too casually,
those
words onto my ear.
I
refused to believe
something
that I‘m certain
is
but another lie.
I
wonder how he mustered to say
that
he did miss me
if
all along
I
had never left.
Can I fall out of love now?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Wonderful words put altogether.
Awesome! This is now my favorite among your posts. :)
ReplyDeleteAwww. So you're in love now? Y u don't keep me updated PP? :)
ReplyDeleteAko din, ito favorite kong post mo so far. Mahirap i-pull off yung less is more and you did it really well. :) *clap clap*
ReplyDeleteganda nito...
ReplyDeleteclap clap :-)
ngaun lang ulit ako ulit napadaan dito, ang cute ng blog mo ngayon kasi simple.haha
ReplyDeleteLe poignant. LOL That's me trying the French accent because I believe it's that amazing.
ReplyDelete@Princess - Thanks anak! :)
ReplyDelete@citybuoy - Thank you kuya. I didn't expect that I can pull it off, chamba lang siguro.haha
@macallister - thank you :))
@mark - Oo, para bumabagay sa blog title.lol
@iamrel - napadicitonary tuloy ako.lol
i agree with kuya cb.
ReplyDelete@LOF- kung maka kuya eh no?haha
ReplyDeletePeople in a relationship have, at one point, experienced this. One time, I was the one saying I miss you, another time, I was the one who didn't get noticed. Life's fair.
ReplyDeletepak na pak! asteg~
ReplyDelete@greenbreaker - so do you mean not reciprocating is being fair? But yes, almost all of us might have experienced this.
ReplyDelete@nowitzki - haha :) relate?haha
simple yet engaging in the sense that it transforms a certain atmosphere from the usual to the certain "can we set this straight?" type.
ReplyDeletethere is beauty in simplicity and few words. keep it up :)